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Red Tears
Contributed by
Djarven
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Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 09:56:22 AM in AEST
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I stand in a forest of roses
Surrounded by the red fragrance
The scent of sweetness touches my soul
It fills my eyes with sorrow
Thick juicy red tears roll down my cheeks
They graze my lips with despair
The tears fall heavy from my chin
They punch the ground like nails
The ground shakes with every drop
But the teardrops are the very seed
That makes the roses start to grow
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Re: Red Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 10:30:26 AM AEST
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Very interesting write.... well done..
Welcome to YPDC...
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Re: Red Tears
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by Sirena_Degana on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:30:13 AM AEST
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| this is veery interesting...GOOD JOB! |
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Re: Red Tears
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:55:30 PM AEST
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| Good job. I like the imagery that the led the roses to grow, it was very vivid and sparked my imagination. Keep up the good writing. |
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