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inundation
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Inundation
When our well
ran dry
we looked up
to the sky,
kept staring
till clouds
congregated
and it rained.
Only it didnt
stop before
our house had
sailed away
and we sat on
the dining table,
granddad made
cursing rain.
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Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2002-12-28 11:30:00]
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Re: inundation
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 02:02:26 PM AEST
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Oh that was not good that the house had sailed away....and all that waiting you all done for the rain to appear....i hope this really didnt happen...but it's beautifully written jan ...thanks for sharing it....sometimes i wish poetry could come with pictures somehow here because i'd love to see what that table looks like....i like it when gramparents make things....it's of very sentamental value in my eyes....
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