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ELEVATING
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the land of the unknown
I rushed to my call
heated, in black and brown
eyes could even see through me
to the sight of the moon in the noon
planted no seed but could feel some grains
though I rose on dark head gear
like the whiteness of the coconut so was my hidden
look at me, an out cast of myself
the wind pierce heavily
bleeding without tears
what coulld this be
horn, horn
with dust of feet
counted my legs to earlier ''called''
my mind could now sleep
just walking thropugh the height of life
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olasunkanmi
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2002-12-28 12:00:00]
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Re: ELEVATING
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 02:06:01 PM AEST
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My friend this is so beautifully written and so sad from what i can see ....the wind pierce heavily bleeding without tears....that's my favorite lines....i thank you for writing such beautiful writings....keep em' coming...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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