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The Wall
Contributed by
humphdj
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Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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For thirty years Ive been taking down this wall
Thirty years of toil,
With my tools of patience and understanding
Patience has worn thin
And theres little left of understanding
New tool are desperately needed
But the cost is too dear
There has been times when Id almost made it
Then just as I thought I may be permitted
Just once to look over this wall
It groans and rumbles from the ground
Rising like a great fortress
To block me yet again from which I seek
Im so tired
Lately I have started to realize
Maybe its not mine to dismantle
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humphdj
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2002-07-22 12:30:00]
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Re: The Wall
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by Chrissie on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 05:39:18 PM AEST
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Profound and very moving...well written Dave.
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Re: The Wall
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by lil_hummingbird on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 06:05:17 AM AEST
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