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Blind
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 05:30:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Borrow my eyes, rip them out of my worthless skull,
Stuff them in your depthless sockets,
Blind one, you shall see what I see
Visions of the Fallen,
Broken and dying, beneath Lifes ruthless fists,
Jagged claws of the hungry and deprived,
All around you,
Yearning for the touch of Hope,
There is none in you
Take a stroll down my desolate road,
Relish the happiness while its present,
Shes a slippery *****, and doesnt stay for long
Savor every caress of love,
Consider yourself lucky, for she is blind,
And only by chance were you chosen
Cherish moments of pride and acceptance,
From the one called Father,
So long ago, since I last felt I made him proud
Weary traveler, crawl the last mile,
There are only 16,
And it doesnt look like therell be anymore
Surprised, are you?
I hear your jaw shattering
Shocked that a child could endure such a beating?
I taste your tears of salty sympathy and horror
I am no mere youth,
Dont let my nave features fool you
I am you, you are me,
We are all one in the same,
Of beautiful blood and diseased flesh,
Yet, our minds are of a different realm
Do you see now? Through these liquid amber eyes?
The horrid illusions of life and people within it?
Perishing, insanity eating away inside,
Decaying in front of your borrowed eyes,
Drown in it all, the despair, the impurity, the death
You have seen all that I wanted you to perceive,
Etched in your mind, knowledge of the world,
Seared into your flesh, mark of the Tainted
Tearing your eyes out, my eyes,
Attempts to claw away the images,
All in vain
Never again will you be blind
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-05-07 17:30:39]
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Re: Blind
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 05:40:09 PM AEST
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Steph ... I haven't the words ...
That was brilliant.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Blind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 05:55:58 PM AEST
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| Gloriously dark, Stephy. I do believe my eyes have seen enough today to last me a while, exploring onto unseen paths where a gate was left open... However, those were different scenes than the one you have so plainly painted here. Lovely work. You have so much talent! *hugs* J. |
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Re: Blind
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 12:43:07 PM AEST
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Devine insight of an angel with latin eyes
and poetic genius . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Blind
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:34:56 PM AEST
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Through your eyes I see your pain. I hope your soul finds only beauty and love. For you deserve to find peace and happiness.
Fabulous write
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Blind
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:48:09 PM AEST
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Im with Naz left me speechless I dont know what to say other than you create one right after the other of perfectly flowing verses
Michelle |
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