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The candle
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I watched the flame that burned all day,
but nothing happened,
it just burned away,
I watch the glow of the candle lite,
burning by the hour,
Illuminating and oh so brite,
and yet I feel the power,
The power the candle will hold,
by watching the flame burn,
seeing the colors mold,
waiting for the return,
Waiting for you to appear,
by the candle lite,
I could wait all year,
by this candle so brite,
wanting only but a glimse,of your face,
or a shadow to appear,
but nothing not a trace,
I looked everywhere,
Than in that moment as I turn,
I watched the flame blow out,
No one in site to watch it burn,
She appeared with out a doubt!
Some might say its crazy I know,
But I believe she was there,
she blew out the candle glow,
To let me know she was here!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-12-28 17:00:00]
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Re: The candle
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 05:10:38 PM AEST
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Aww geez you had to go and make me cry again....this is soooo beautiful..the feeling that came over you knowing that she was there with you must have been so warming inside...thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry Christina, it's very inspirational for me as you know.....
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Re: The candle
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 05:42:59 PM AEST
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I believe she was there also...I believe that was a kiss...you write beautifully thanks for sharing
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Re: The candle
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 06:33:19 PM AEST
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I don't believe in ghosts so I am not going to say anything in regards to that. I liked this poem though very well written. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme. Keep 'em up...
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