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die inside
Contributed by
vampirelover
on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 07:37:03 PM in AEST
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as the tears bottle up inside
we all start to die
we feel and see the pain we can't hide
and as time goes on the world starts to change
as things move on you start to question the good things in life
as you let the blood rush
your screaming inside
wondering what's there to find
as you stay silent to yourself
you look in the mirror
you realize your bottle is breaking
as you watch people faking
acting like everythings okay
thought they never realized how you
died inside
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2005-05-07 19:37:03]
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Re: die inside
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:25:58 PM AEST
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It's good, and it really makes sense, thats how I feel sometimes.
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Re: die inside
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:45:38 PM AEST
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hit with a total punch . I liked it words were truthful and emotional
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