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My Secret Hiding Place.
Contributed by
Horsecrzy13
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Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:23:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Your arms a hiding place I run when I'm scared.
My heart, a kingdom you stay.
When I obey and follow, my heart's nolonger hollow.
For I excepted you
And you've excepted me,
And no other love was ment to be.
Your ten commandments I follow,
No longer will my heart be hollow.
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2005-05-07 20:23:30]
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Re: My Secret Hiding Place.
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:04:33 PM AEST
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Short and simple. I do believe that it needs some work, though. It sounds rough and almost... unsteady.
Well, take care Brina,
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