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Sunrise, Sunset
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 10:01:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The day moves on
But hers is locked in the past
The sun rises, the sun sets
Neither helps her move on
Watching the sun rise
A new day has begun
But her hand still holds the gun
As the sun rises
Staring at the sun set
Another day has ended
Just wishing her life she couldve ended
Watching the sun slowly set
The sun rises yet again
She gets out of bed
Tries to go unfed
Watching the sun rise yet again
The sun sets into its bed for the night
Still wanting to end this long-lasting strife
Still holding the knife
Watches the sun set and says good night
Next morning at sunrise, the sun comes up
This girl is beating herself with her hands
Following all her bodys commands
Watching the sun climb up
The evening that follows, the sun sets
The girl is finally dead
They lay her into the bed
As the sun sets
The next morning, the sun rises
The day still moves on
Even though the girl is dead
But the sun still sets and it still rises
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Re: Sunrise, Sunset
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by Jaycee on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:14:09 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was really moving, the painful life of the girl against the backdrop of the progress of time. I can only hope that this was not how it really ended. |
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Re: Sunrise, Sunset
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:30:02 PM AEST
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even though the world will go on w/o you, i know that my world would stand still in agony for far too long so stay
kc
awsome poem, really significant, i like it |
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Re: Sunrise, Sunset
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:35:48 AM AEST
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wow... sad, but very VERY good. amazing, i didnt kno u were so talented. just as long as the girl isnt u... we are dying alone together remember? k. good.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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