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Words
Contributed by
sexygirl
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Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Words that echo in my mind
Of a day when love was so new
The scent of your cologne left behind
On my pillow reminds me of you
When you laid beside me it felt so right
Your gentle hands how they caressed my skin
Please don't go, stay the night
The love we shared has no sin
Miles that may lie between us
The roads we have travelled to be by each others side
My love for you is deeper and I must confess
I know now what I didn't know then, I want to be your bride
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2002-12-28 18:20:00]
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Re: Words
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 10:57:44 PM AEST
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Oh wow i don't think i've ever seen a lady in her own way tell a man that she wants to be his bride....kinda like askin him to marry you hehe.....i wanna know what he says!!!! So you hafta write a sequal to this one.....lol....Perhaps you could get him to join and write the sequal??? sorry ima sucker for love hehe....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot it's beautifully written.....and surely it will take his very breath away....
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Re: Words
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by Jayraja on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:54:07 PM AEST
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I hope he reads this. A wonderful poem of love. He would surely love this and YOU TOO.
What is in a title, it is the words that count and may be the title is just right :) :) :)
Love from India - Joel - |
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Re: Words
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by InfamousG on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 06:47:27 PM AEST
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| I like this, very nice. I'd marry you!!! |
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