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Will you Make it
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 12:16:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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After all the power that is
Self propelled motivation
The box speaks in connection
A Noble pursuit overrated
The featured moon returns
Its replacement hangs low
Competition for the suns love
A stronger more apt moon survives
So simple are the things shared
The flag bears an ordinary symbol
Ultimate comfort in a lofty chair
Right when you need it in here
Consider the lengthy lasting
The relief goes on and on
A projector that misdirects
The walls of the city crumble
Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-05-08 12:16:34]
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Re: Will you Make it
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:21:14 PM AEST
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| A bit different than your usual write, but I like it. Nice poem. Scorp. |
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Re: Will you Make it
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:21:14 PM AEST
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| Very Nice...~~~Michelle~~~ |
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