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Our Love Will Last
Contributed by
sride686
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Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:38:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I dream of you every time I sleep
I dream of this love that runs so deep
I open my eyes only to see
that this dream of our love is all I need
So you hold me close and you hold me tight
With our bodies pressed together so right
And were lost in our minds the deeper we go
And the deeper we go our love starts to grow
For I can see our future and I can see our past
I can see this love that will forever last
For in our past our love was strong
So in our future how could it ever go wrong
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sride686
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2005-05-08 13:38:11]
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Re: Our Love Will Last
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 01:50:17 PM AEST
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| I can relate to that..Sometimes all we have are our dreams but, leaves a warm feelin in our hearts....Very Beautiful ..Love it.. Keep up the great work..~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Our Love Will Last
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by snookams on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:08:44 PM AEST
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| this is my first comment of poems on this site. but i do believe what i have seen so far has been very deep and inspirational. love is such a hard thing to write about without making it sound so distant and unreal, but of my opinion you have it perfect! |
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Re: Our Love Will Last
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:16:48 PM AEST
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Ah yes that's more like it my dear friend. Talent at it's best. Heavenly divine. A true master piece flowing with the essence of a love so true. Keep the faith dear Steve u have a heart of gold. As usual beautiful , sweet and so pleasant to read. Keep the happy ones coming dear friend.
*hugs*
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Re: Our Love Will Last
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by wetnwild on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:29:52 PM AEST
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| Great peom, keep up the good work! |
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