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Why Must I die?
Contributed by
dthwlkr
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY
I GAVE MY SHARE, OF LIFE AND HOPE
AND GAVE A NEW LIGHT TO PEOPLE WHEN THEY NEEDED IT MOST.
SO WHY DO THEY PUSH ME INTO THIS LONELINESS AND DARKNESS,
FORCED TO LIVE WITHIN ME, I RECEDE INTO MY EMPTINESS
I WALK THROUGH THE SANDS ALONE
AND THATS HOW I STAND TODAY, YES ALONE I STAND TODAY
WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
WON'T SOMEONE TELL ME WHY MUST PAIN BE MY DESTINY
SO TELL ME WHY MUST I FEEL, THE COLD KNIFE ON MY NECK,
MY SCARRED, AILING SOUL SHATTERS AS I PUSH IT DEEPER WITHIN ME.
AS BLOOD COMES FLOWING THROUGH, I AM PULLED DEEPER INTO MY INSANITY
I AM LYING ON THE COLD, DAMP FLOOR, MY LIFE SPILLED ALL AROUND ME.
SO TELL ME WHY MUST I DIE
HELP ME FOR PAIN IS MY DESTINY
AS I LIE WAITING FOR MY VEINS TO RUN DRY
SCREAMING IN AGONY, ONE LAST TIME FOR HELP I CRY
WAITING FOR HOPE, FOR A MILLION MILES I CONTINUE TO FALL
BUT I KNOW ONLY PAIN SHALL ANSWER MY CALL
SO I DIE, ALONE, IN DEATH AS IN LIFE
NO HOPE,NO DESIRE, EXCEPT THAT........
WHY MUST I SUFFER LIKE A KING REMOVED FROM HIS THRONE
MY AGONY IS SUCH FOR I TOO DIE ALONE
Copyright ©
dthwlkr
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2005-05-08 14:09:21]
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Re: Why Must I die?
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 03:32:48 PM AEST
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| Pretty cool. It reminds me a bit of DevilDriver. |
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Re: Why Must I die?
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 06:30:16 PM AEST
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| Very good---I hear it like a punk song. Excellent choice of words in this write. "I am lying on the cold, damp floor, my life spilled all around me..." Chilling, sad...Scorp. |
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Re: Why Must I die?
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by Supergurl1071 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:09:13 PM AEST
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| Wow, I'm extremely impressed, feelings are expressed so well and the words are very powerful. I feel your pain completely. Great word choice and it's all done so clearly and visually. Loved it! |
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