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It is I who should Leave
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Contained emotions
That overspill with empathy
Disassembled factory
Churning out the desperate pleas
A bucket of solitude
Is all a man needs
The brilliance of this universe
Is that it always entices
A being has been
When his time has run up
The feeding from within
Confuses this slippery knot
My head beat in
The boxer won with a knockout
A disappointing effort
The battle has been decided
Admitting the hurt
They all watch for weakness
Walk alone in the dark
Reminiscent of the child who breaths
A premonition I accept
It is I who should leave
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2005-05-08 20:01:17]
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Re: It is I who should Leave
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:34:58 PM AEST
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| So many really good lines in this poem, and I love the ending.......Scorp. |
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