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Curse of their Price
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Haunted by shadows
the noise of the street
death lingers near me
waiting for pain to meet
Screaming voices
kept quiet for too long
lingering emotion
pumping into my mind
Overwheleming noise of shadows
drifters of this world
hearing a noise that only I can hear
searching for an escape
Followed by people
never meant to meet
screaming of angels
as they fall by my feet
Never what's needed
never enough
to continue through fire
a blazing pit of hell
Waiting for one more mess up
my last chance is over
spent on the feel of your lips
and the curse of their price
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spazz911
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2005-05-08 20:14:22]
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Re: Curse of their Price
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:21:43 PM AEST
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nice. good write, kc. i like it. keep up the work!
~sprints |
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Re: Curse of their Price
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:33:23 PM AEST
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Im feeling this in my heart my friend
hugssss
Michelle |
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Re: Curse of their Price
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:40:42 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. I really like the fourth verse, and the title's appropriate. Scorp. |
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Re: Curse of their Price
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by Jaycee on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:09:20 PM AEST
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| Very vivid imagery. Very unsettled, nay, agitated emotions. Thought provoking. |
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Re: Curse of their Price
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST
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A great thought provoking piece of poetry. Very well conveyed. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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