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Soft Core
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:17:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This phone wont stop ringing
Im gonna toss it at this white wall
Im gonna rip that black plug out
Im gonna chew the wires off with my teeth
The mail wont stop coming
Everyday the mailman brings more
Bills and offers, turns out Im rich
If only I subscribe to their culture of myths
The dog wont stop barking
It drives me insane all night
Its owners are loony swingers
They rock and roll get drunk and fight
The television wont shut off
The scrambled soft porn blares
Static music rumbles
A wood bat through the screen is next
The rain wont stop falling
A drought will never again be seen
The trees wont protect the birds
It wont part with its precious leaves
The water wont stop dripping
As I try and fall asleep
Memories of kissing my love
In this dark night city heat
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jyssvw22
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2005-05-08 20:17:54]
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Re: Soft Core
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:39:22 PM AEST
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this is great! images dance across this screen nicely done!!
Michelle |
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Re: Soft Core
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:43:58 PM AEST
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| Very good---I've had a day or two like this myself... Scorp. |
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Re: Soft Core
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:52:31 PM AEST
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| Great write... best sleepless night poem i've read.... I can totally relate to the barking dogs part... I like all the disturbances in the stanzas and at the end theres something good that makes it sound like they fell asleep.... |
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