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Give me peace, or death i will choose
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 01:59:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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my heart always wishes for more
yet i sit lonesome
so painfully often
apart from my existence
where i don't belong
bleeding and lost
i wish i could mend the wounds
that scar my soul
all it would take
is for someone to hold me close
but that's too much to ask
i feel i have inherited more pain
from the world
than can be counted
and now i just feel broken
with the pain all mine
like the emptiness
that i inhabit alone
all i ask is someone
take my pain, if for just one night
and hold me, hold me to your heart
gather my misery to you and hug me tight
i have done my share
i have fought all the fights
and the years have gone by
and i still yet stand
with my blood as tears
and the arena floor
my daily life
have i not suffered enough?
i beg for mercy, give me peace or kill me swift
no more torture
no more strife
give me a love, some happiness,
or death i will choose
over this facade called life
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Re: Give me peace, or death i will choose
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:15:40 AM AEST
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| Some times do we feel like that...eyes are moistrued after reading this.. |
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Re: Give me peace, or death i will choose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 03:49:07 AM AEST
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wow.
what an emotive write.
It is painful to merely read...
Re-opening old wounds and discovering antiquated emotions...re-living it is the worst part of all.
Regardless, I am moved by this piece.
Yet you must know...that things will pick up...
All the best oxox.
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Re: Give me peace, or death i will choose
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:59:05 AM AEST
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Great poem
Such tragedy in living
Beautiful Write
~Dawn |
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