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Dedicated to Someone Special
Contributed by
denno
on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:19:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are my sun and my rain.
You are my smiles and my tears.
You are my love and my pain.
You are my dreams and my fears.
You are the key to my lock.
You are the catch to my door.
You are the lid to my box.
You are the boards of my floor.
Without you there is nothing.
Without you I can't breate.
Without you I am bleeding.
Without you my soul would leave.
But the warmness of your smile,
and the softness of your face,
keeps me safe for the while.
The fears of my existance,
leave without a trace
Copyright ©
denno
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2005-05-09 06:19:44]
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Re: Dedicated to Someone Special
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:27:28 AM AEST
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| All I can say Is brilliant..Love it ~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Dedicated to Someone Special
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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Awww how emotional and just really lovely! The way you describe your lover as the key to even the basic things in life shows how much you are actually in love with him . Great work!
Keep writing,
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Re: Dedicated to Someone Special
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:53:48 AM AEST
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i'm a sucker for writing like this, so simple and sweet! very cute, hope the special someone catches a glimpse of this...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Dedicated to Someone Special
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:20:24 PM AEST
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| Really liked this. I feel the same about that special someone in my life. Hope everything works out for you and that person. Good write. |
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