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Reality
Contributed by
Moon_kitten05_07
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:58:13 AM in AEST
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reality is hard concrete chafing you skin
the cold harsh unrelenting friction that will always be ture.
the strong musty odor of still air in an old room
the suffocating thick fumes of constant reminder
the dark hazy gloom of a bank closed bungeon
the dark shodows of rain cloud covering the sun
reality is the bitter taste of jealousy
the sour siting of greed
the screech of nails on a chalk board
the moan of a tring mother
reality is teh awakened sense
the explosion of common sense smeared in your face.
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Re: Reality
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:21:22 AM AEST
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wipe off the smear! it seems that way, but not always. nice take on reality...
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