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Ancient Youth
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Take a look at yourself
You wrinkled old fool
Trying to act like you just left school
A gallon of cheap odour
covers the stench of your cheaper alcohol
Try to mix in, be cool
I pity you, you make me wince
Look in the mirror go on
What do you see; a donkey
with a clowns face, not real
Painted there, just like the inside
Of you
Plastic body, soul, whole
You can never be what
You try to be
A halucination
Faux pas creation
You've had your day
Now go away
Be who you are, sit alone
I spit on you all
Disgusted......
Copyright ©
adsalamon
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2005-05-09 10:01:41]
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Re: Ancient Youth
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:24:21 AM AEST
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those last two lines!! oi, like the frenchmen in monty python... failures remind the rest of their success i suppose. nice write.
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