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Angel see my face
Contributed by
In_a_while
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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This morning's dawn is love not gone,
angels kiss my face
they whisper song, but not too long,
do all applaud disgrace?
soft wings black bring feelings back,
unto my skin of stone
her halo noose brings jugs blood juice,
within i drink my own
their soft black hair caress despair,
head west to hills of grey
soak my head in words not said,
no actors here do play
touch the gown sink deeper down
unto my knees of red
my grip grows weak my sleep does leak
my dreams all died in bed.....
can't i sleep but longer...?
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Re: Angel see my face
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:22:41 PM AEST
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Very well-worded. I enjoyed this...
Scorp. |
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Re: Angel see my face
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by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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no sleep for you, precious! bwahaha!! okay okay, nevermind me - brilliant wordplay, reminds me of poe. very nice...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Angel see my face
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by sride686 on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 02:15:50 PM AEST
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| Another great write and it was worded very well with that great style of yours. It had a deep meaning to it that made the reader really get it to the write. Take care and keep up with these great writes so I can read many more. Later for now….Steve |
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