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A Crown Of Thorns
Contributed by
MoonTides
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Prickled edges of scorn forgotten,
A sharp sword slashing open my life,
Painfully naked I watch as hate,
Bites into my life,
Jaws slimy with fate.
Nectar was life's birth,
The unfolding of a bitter rose,
To be cursed with thorns,
When the dying sweetness has come.
Delectable now shall death be,
Feeling now the hurt and sting of grace.
Nettles of hate,
That were barbed with doubt,
Dug into my flesh,
As my soul strove for hope.
The last fragments of joy
Were picked clean from my soul.
Already their bitter song,
Is singing in my ears,
A wreath of thorns is crowning my head.
Im suffering the parting blood-
And I know Im almost dead.
The last cry from my calling lips,
On my death white face,
Three quivering tears lie
I surrender to the being,
That has cursed me with so much pain,
As it clothes me,
In a cloak of darkness.
Relief has settled on my face,
The evil has now left,
My stone dead body where it lay.
And the thorns have withered,
And turned to dust,
The rose has bloomed with an ever-greedy lust,
And my heart has stopped when the pain became too much.
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MoonTides
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2002-12-28 22:40:00]
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Re: A Crown Of Thorns
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 10:51:01 PM AEST
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And upon that cloak of darkness lays the velvet crushed bitter kiss that has soaked into the withered thorns which soak into your lustful head..the rose that bloomed picked your soul apart and took the sword of bloody nectar..i wish i may i wish i might have this passion i read which captures me tonight.....and whoa.................i do not know where that came from it just came out ...this poem captured the very depth of my soul and my inner being....thank you for sharing such a passionate beautiful write...welcome to YPDC i look foward to reading more of your poetry...
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Re: A Crown Of Thorns
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:53:10 AM AEST
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Hello Moon Tides,
This is so stunning, what a brilliant write.
Thank you so much for this.
Catch Ya |
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Re: A Crown Of Thorns
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 04:35:14 AM AEST
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| Awsome write... keep it up ~delusions~ |
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Re: A Crown Of Thorns
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by MoonTides on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 10:44:47 PM AEST
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| Thanks for your comment! Glad you liked it. |
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Re: A Crown Of Thorns
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:48:04 PM AEST
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| your words captivate well written |
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