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I was...
Contributed by
Richard
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
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I was a flame,
Flaming in fire,
I was a hare,
Hiding in briar,
I was a drop,
Running in the rain,
I was a scythe,
Slicing the grain.
Axe and Tree,
Ship and sea,
Naught that lives,
Is strange to me.
I was a beggar,
Pleading a meal,
I was a warrior,
Sword of steel,
I was a falcon,
Flying high,
I was a deer,
Scampering by.
Axe and tree,
Ship and sea,
Naught that lives,
Is strange to me.
Copyright ©
Richard
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2002-12-28 23:20:00]
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Re: I was...
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:28:19 PM AEST
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Richard this was a good write, although i have to say im concerned about why you are depressed all the time, i hope things do and are getting better for you, this poem is a terrific start...it's beautiful thanks for sharing it...
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Re: I was...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:17:10 AM AEST
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Hi Richard,
Very creative write! Luv it!
Hope you are all cheered up now.
Thanks for commenting on my work.
Take care, and remember we all luv you.
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: I was...
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 02:21:12 PM AEST
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| very good write thank you for sharing it |
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