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I Can't Breathe
Contributed by
cocacola1331
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 08:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I try to swim back to the top
Where the light shines down
I've tried so many times
But I'm pulled down by the tide
It's too strong, too strong
Can't handle this anymore
And I'm drowning
I can't breathe, I can't breathe
And here I am trapped in this
Pitch black world forever
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2005-05-09 20:26:00]
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Re: I Can't Breathe
(User Rating: 1 )
by MeenieMo on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:12:35 PM AEST
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| I have felt like so many times. sometimes this world just drags me and pulls me down and i feel like ending it all. it's then i realize that i am not alone. people are three to help me deal. Great job |
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