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Heaven Hath No Glory
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:08:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hell hath no fury,
Like a woman scorn.
But heaven hath no glory,
Like the beauty with which your adorn.
You're The sun,
That pierces through my clouds.
You're the gentle hand,
That removes my dark shroud.
Your my heaven,
When this world brings me hell.
Your the ear that hears,
Everything i have to tell.
I am the canvas,
You're the artists hand.
You paint me with love,
You erase the bland.
You say having me is enough,
But i know you deserve so much more.
I wish i could show you,
Just how much you're adored.
I want to give you all that you desire,
My love i do not feign.
If they were mine to lable,
The stars would bear your name.
I just want you to know,
won't you tell me please?
Tell me how i can show you,
Just how much you mean to me.
Copyright ©
tin
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2005-05-10 00:08:23]
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Re: Heaven Hath No Glory
(User Rating: 1 )
by Poetryanimal on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:09:52 AM AEST
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This is a good poem, but you needed to pay
attention to the your and you're wordings. You
tended to use your when you're should of
been used. You're is you are where your
is possession. Other than that it was pretty
good minus a few typo's. Keep on writing.
God bless |
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Re: Heaven Hath No Glory
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by somedaylove on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:58:40 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem.........it seems in love we can never show the ones we love enough how we care but the truth is they know..........Keep up the great work |
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Re: Heaven Hath No Glory
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:14:08 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem, portrays your love for your partner greatly. You indeed have a great talent.
Keep writing and take care,
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx |
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