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Contributed by
saha
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:48:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Did you know? I've been here all along Waitin' for you to recognize me in the crowd Of faceless people. Sitting motionless in silence River of people passing me by Without a single word Sheltered in their thoughts. The daily show begins They smile to each others Askin' questions without a meaning. 'Cause this is right It should be so. After passing, forget they ever met. You've been there to Didn't you? But now you're gone Drown in the crowd. Not black or white Just gray Another day is gone.
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2005-05-10 09:48:00] (Date/Time posted on
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(User Rating: 1 ) by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:18:31 AM AEST (User
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Bravo this is great, i like the way it's so open asking alot of me as a reader. It sounds so nice, almost like it's drifting like a leaf floating to the ground. I particuly like the ending and the 'it should be so.' A very good poem thanx for posting it. |
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(User Rating: 1 ) by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:19:45 AM AEST (User
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Bravo this is great, i like the way it's so open asking allot of me as a reader. It sounds so nice, almost like it's drifting like a leaf floating to the ground. I particularly like the ending and the 'it should be so.' A very good poem thanx for posting it. |
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(User Rating: 1 ) by Jyssvw on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:51:13 PM AEST (User
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nice write, i enjoyed reading this alot |
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