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AHHHHH
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:48:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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my pain your pleasure can anything be real can anything be true?
wanting to die but i must breath you hurt me more then you can see
holding till the last running away fast all this water i'm drowniong
the comfort of the fiere hoplessness lost in the flames quit blaming me
it's not my fault
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Re: AHHHHH
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by heartquake on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:13:39 PM AEST
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| I loved the title... it fits perfectly for the poem lol... but as a guy, i feel the need to defend myself... i don't think that the situation you wrote about doesn't only happens to girls... i've been in that situation many times.... 90% of my poems that i've written through the years are about relationships just like that... I'm not saying that I type-casted my poetry its just that theres plenty of feelings and ways to write about situations like that.... but keep up the good work and despite many allegations there are still some good guys out there, you just gotta sift through the bad ones |
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