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The Sea
Contributed by
Supergurl1071
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Through the swirling sands of time
and the mist of glittering sea
the land that once looked back with life
is now a world of black, without light
the glow that once lit up your face
seems dimmer now that you've been jaded
so many things to comprehend
in life and love, when does it end?
and does it ever really cease
do we live each day with fear and grief?
Scared for the future, regret for the past,
why are we never happy with what we have?
I often dream of a magical place
where turquoise lakes glitter and shine
with no pollution, all clean and pure
as the sand that covers the eastern shore
and a white mist swirls over everything like clouds
and music plays everywhere; a twinkling pixie-like sound
and there is no unhappiness, no nothing like that
just the pure emotions of the world that will make us complete
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Re: The Sea
(User Rating: 1 )
by dthwlkr on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:37:06 PM AEST
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wow so many reads and no comments???
its a lovely write shows that u have the power to dream for a better place and a better tomorrow, it flows nicely and i can almost picture it.
its pretty gud, reminds me of "I Gaze On" and "The Grey Havens"
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