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My grave is my door

Contributed by In_a_While on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Curse my bad luck
no rabbit foot stuck
nothing is shining
shoe dull bad timing

damn all the clouds
shout silent sounds
i wanna be gone
the green from the lawn

take all my bones
my sticks and my stones
i've no power to flee
when apes disagree

trapped in a cube
four walls become you
this mind of no more
thinks death is my door...

...to a better life.

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-05-10 13:17:50]
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Re: My grave is my door (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:23:05 PM AEST
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Definately dark...really really good...and weird...:D Jenxx

Re: My grave is my door (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:51:17 PM AEST
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GREAT and WONDERFUL poem! I really didnt get it until the last two lines. The last two lines made it everything it is.
ALINA

Re: My grave is my door (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST
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nice poem. last door will be the coffin ..

Re: My grave is my door (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:11:57 AM AEST
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Yet another very different write by one of my favorite authors. Your writes are so nice to read because there are none like them on the site. Very dark and very deep and was a great read. Take care my friend and keep up the good writes….Steve

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