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Weakness
Contributed by
Maxximus
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:40:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To surrender so completely
A breath given as ground
Such is the pain I seek
I feel...
It is agony that keeps us from life
But it is the same that keeps us alive
These wounds are self inflicted
Scars taken for another
Our bruised pride holds me still
And I know what is true
What was the heart of strength
Now whispers as dying embers do
Everything I had
Everything I had abandoned
Was lost in you
Still so precious the peal of your voice
I hold onto this for it keeps me alive
As weak as I am
Through unclouded eyes now I see
This was your final gift to me
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Maxximus
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2005-05-10 13:40:09]
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Re: Weakness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:14:13 AM AEST
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*tilts her head, inquisitively...yet mostly in awe*
I much admired the use of personification.
"the heart of strength...now whispers as dying embers"
*sighs...eyes dreamy within their sockets*
"The peal of your voice"...
mmm..attentive in detail.
Beautiful.
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