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Left Behind
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You hurt my heart
You messed with my head
I fell apart
From the things you said.
My memories I've sold
Cast them away
No more to be told
There left to decay.
As I stumble
Down this road
I hear you mumble
And on you strode.
I cried inside
As you left me behind
I started to reside
In my mind.
There's nothing to lose
The voice says now
You've been abused
You'll win somehow.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2002-12-29 08:00:00]
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Re: Left Behind
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:52:09 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem & how it flowed smoothly! Great peice here! Yes we all hate to get left behind! Christina |
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Re: Left Behind
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by OreO on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:58:07 AM AEST
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Well this one certainly made me think about all the hurtful things i said to someone i love ....and i wont sit and try and justify what i said to him because what was said was pretty hateful and mean but that goes for both of us....i think it's safe to say we both hurt eachother the same....im just glad that he's alive...and that 2 very special lil ones are ok to...among 2 more that i think of quite often that live there with him.....i thank you for your writings my friend they touch me deeply and take me back in time....Keep writing....
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Re: Left Behind
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:50:52 AM AEST
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This was so different to your other poem ... I was surprised. It was short and direct - I loved your words and can relate to them very well.
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