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in just one spontaneous night
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:30:41 PM in AEST
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Just to complicate matters even more
Im sure you will come back again
Just to make this wound sore
Im positive you will return
Only to push me to the limit
Will you arrive and steal the light
When youre ready to take what I was given
Then you will put up your best fight
When you see that I have been beaten
Then will you offer a helping hand
When you know I cant take it anymore
When youre sure youre in command
At the moment that I need you
You will suddenly appear
At the precise time I loath you
Will you suddenly be without fear
And upon impact you will make your mark
You will speak words curt and concise
You will change what I have built
In just one spontaneous night
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2005-05-10 19:30:41]
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Re: in just one spontaneous night
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:57:34 PM AEST
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i really love this poem. the emotion that is portrayed through the words is excellent. i can feel through reading the poem, exactly what u were feeling when writing it. i know what it's like to have someone there constantly that u either love or hate but can't get over because they are constantly around.
great write!!
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