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Abide Firefly Right On By
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:52:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I thank you for the reason Step on down that same side steet Flash of lightning beneath me I take off and burn it to the beat
I fly away with deception Give the sky a wink and try to stay alive Jump around with some purpose Break the chains of rules to which we will never abide
Crack a hole in my head I reach down and give my soul a kiss Let the time fly with no worries No worries with the smoke upon my lips
Turn around and then I see you Flash a smile with intentions so innocent Stuck with a purpose And wondering of seeming malicious intent
Walk around the street light Firefly flies on by Reach down to my soul Grab life by the bow tie
Fireworks in my brain tonight Sit around and chase the breeze All the doors to life unlocked No need for a mess of keys
Hole in the wall Then I come right back inside Stuck alone with an emptiness And back again to the rules, by wihich we shall abide
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Exodus
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2005-05-11 00:52:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:41:10 AM AEST (User
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WOW!
I have never read anything like this!
This is Unreal!
It feels random, yet just like a knot of blood vessels, these words connect and create networks with one another.
"Flash of lightning beneath me"
"Give the sky a wink "
Illogical yet strangely appealing.
Perhaps within symbolical context?
"Crack a hole in my head
I reach down and give my soul a kiss"
Riddle me, riddle me not!
I love it!
Contradicting yet ...OUTRAGEOUS!
"Grab life by the bow tie"
I am completely dumbfounded by your ingeniousness.
I am so impressed.
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kyarn on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:47:20 AM AEST (User
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This is really good. Wonderful job. I like it alot. |
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:38:50 AM AEST (User
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ditto, Im stumfinded with this remarkable write.
Thank God for folks like u.
I've often wondered how u guys do it but life by the bow tie says it all.
A masterpeice to all that walk the beat.
huggs,
emy |
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