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mystery
Contributed by
catz77
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:56:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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He stopped ubruptly
Turned around and said something
Then ran far away
Copyright ©
catz77
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2005-05-11 13:56:31]
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Re: mystery
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:23:24 PM AEST
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I stoped ubruptly when I seen this title
Said "I like this"
Now running away*...(nice job, thought provoking)
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Re: mystery
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by poet70 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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I am learning how to write Haiku Poems, and this one is a good one, my first one was a bomb lol. I had no clue what I was doing, I like to spread my wings and try a little of everything, and so I tried and fail, so now I sit here reading Haiku Poems and learning, this one was a pretty good one, like you said, you look at it in many ways
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Re: mystery
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:37:47 PM AEST
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very nice indeed.. a great visual.
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Re: mystery
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:57:45 PM AEST
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being able to look at a poem in more than one way is what makes poetry great...this was excellent.
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