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Darkness In The Light
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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No boundaries there to see
Horizons consist of more horizons
Limitations become limitless
Can there be a start without a stop
A beginning without an end
In the celestial glow
Are we able to visualize where we have been
But not detect where we go
Might it bend, and navigate the circumference
Return to sender, address unknown
Does the darkness surround the light
Or does light encompass the darkness
Could the heavens run out or stars
It is a mystery to me, I don't understand
Is this something that cannot be comprehended by man
So formulate a theory, make a stand
What do you believe, right brain, left brain
Enter the dimension of interstellar comprehension
A universe made up of energy
Things that to the human eye are invisible
Molecules
Atoms
Protons, neutrons
Particles of energy, all play a role
Tell me, how can something never end
Oh, it may end you say , but what becomes of emptyness
Nothing, and what is that?
God only knows
Infinity
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-05-11 16:23:16]
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Re: Darkness In The Light
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:17:12 PM AEST
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Very potent questions indeed!!
Good write.
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Re: Darkness In The Light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:04:03 AM AEST
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I find this really enjoyable, mystic thing. Infinity does seem to exist in the space between molecules and of that space we know very little. Such a cool write! I have only one thing to add; I think you meant "out OF stars" in first line, third stanza. I know how hard reading some typefaces can be! Great work on the eternal questions!
J.
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Re: Darkness In The Light
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:12:09 PM AEST
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Bravo Terry ... I get a feel of experimentation here ... it seems like you have taken a step through a doorway and are now moving slowly into the world beyond. This seems a new style for you with the looping questions and front to back and forth words. I like it alot !! Bravo !!!
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