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My World
Contributed by
dddcherriez
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 07:30:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my world is so ***** up
my world is upside down
my world is truly a living hell...
that was it, my world
my world before I came back
I came back to see everyone
everyone was glad
glad that i came back
and so was I...
my world was less ***** up
my world was on it's side
my world was more like heaven...
that was my world
my world when I got back
back was I, but something changed
changed within my heart
within my heart there was a love
a love for someone, but who?
my world was perfect
my world was rightside up
my world was heaven...
that was my world
my world when I found love
love for you
you and me
me and you
you became my joy, my soul, my heart...
my world is wonderful
my world is beautiful
my world is YOU!
that is it, my world
my world with you
you and me
me and you together
together forever
forever in love.
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dddcherriez
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2005-05-11 19:30:03]
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Re: My World
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, I love the transitional stanzas describing your world after each event, very unique. Great Write keep it up!
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