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Back from the Brink
Contributed by
Jaycee
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:21:55 PM in AEST
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It's because of her
I'm back from the brink
She was the catalyst
I know just not think
Contemplating my death
like in Jumpin' the Bridge
do I crack up the car
or suck live voltage
Neither came to pass
it was no accident
after reading the poem
that was so poignant
Haven't we all felt
or been touched by a poem
that we read on this site
that's our second home
I was touched by this poem
to which I owe life
for I'd given up
a victim of strife
A month has since passed
that I decided to live
but in thanks for this angel
I have nothing to give
Then the idea hit me
that my gratitude would prevail
was that we all show our thanks
and send her a mail
Her birthday is coming
on the 14th of May
Just click a link below
before Saturday
... and many thanks...
Send a message via YPDC private message: Private Message Link
Send an e-mail through your e-mail client program: E-mail Link
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-05-11 22:21:55]
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:29:04 PM AEST
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| Oops, got the HTML way wrong on the e-mail link. It's what happens when you do this past 11 PM. This e-mail link should work: Link. The Private Message Link works fine. |
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by Poetryanimal on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:35:45 PM AEST
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This was a very good witness. I tried to send
an email by clicking the link, but it didn't work.
God bless from Bill |
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:46:45 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. It is always great to let someone know they inspired you in a great way. I did click on the link and send her a Happy Birthday wish.
All the best,
Rita |
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:40:24 AM AEST
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This was a wonderful way of expressing your gratitude, JC... I am happy you are here to do it...
Jenni |
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:12:14 AM AEST
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An outstanding touching and very heartfelt piece of poetry u have here dear Jaycee. Expressed with heartfelt gratitude and sincere warmth. A wonderful write.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Back from the Brink
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:41:26 AM AEST
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aww thank u. yer the best. i luv this poem hehe. happy birthday to me... lol
jennie* |
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