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Smells Like Suicide
Contributed by
Vermilion
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hanging, swinging back and fourth
Suffocating in the empty source
I dont want the help youll give
To fix my head, dont want to live
Its my choice
To sound my voice
And I dont care about myself
Not anymore
The end is near without the breathing
Rid me of the falling feeling
I just want the Other Side
Smells a lot like suicide
Its my decision
End the division
And I dont care about myself
Not anymore
Dry your eyes, please dont cry
Give forgiveness one last try
Soul mate, we will never truly end
Give in to wherever we will descend
Its my choice
To stop my voice
And I dont care about myself
Not anymore
Jesus condescending me
His decision to ever let me be free
I have no place to wait and hide
Oh, this smells a lot like suicide
Smells like suicide
Smells like suicide
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Vermilion
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:27:21 AM AEST
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| Very dark write, it was really, really good. Look forward to more for sure. Keep it up! |
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
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by MaggotsGoneWild on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:56:07 PM AEST
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| Love the name. Got the idea from Nirvana I see. Very dark Love it ^-^ |
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 07:25:28 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem. |
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