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UPSIDE DOWN
Contributed by
swimsweetie
on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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playing on the playground
hanging upside down
looking at the things
that should be up but are down
I see the clouds turn gray
and then it starts to rain
I start to slip and then fall down
I can hear your screaming coming towards me loudly then fade into the crowd
i can see the darkness creeping and then its all I see
the sirens are screaming
and then i'm picked up off the ground
and now i'm the hospital lying on the bed
just because i didn't listen to what you said
you told me not to do it
not to hang on the bar
not to take the dare
but I didn't listen
and look where i'm at right now
Just because I was hanging upside down
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swimsweetie
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2002-12-29 17:40:00]
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Re: UPSIDE DOWN
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:02:26 PM AEST
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| I wonder it you saw the picture, or did you see my child fall, |
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Re: UPSIDE DOWN
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by justadreamer on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:14:05 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully written poem. I liked it very much. You can definitely see what is happening to the child. |
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