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Merry Christmas
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:52:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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12/31/05 was the day that I broke
Each cut was like brush stroke
Every drop like paint
My floor was the art of red taint
But now I just want to faint
Making this into something it aint
I bleed red tears
Thinking back on happier years
No thoughts of hatred
No thoughts of what was said
Just sugar plum fairies that dance in my head
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-05-12 08:52:23]
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Re: Merry Christmas
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:05:57 AM AEST
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Very Nice write hun..
05'? I ask you can you see whats in my future also? ..
just funnin...Feels as if it meant to rejoice the new year with new life decisions...
Keep writing ~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Merry Christmas
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:15:36 AM AEST
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| I loved the imagery in this poem, it was very captivating! the emotions were mournful, and the ending line was bittersweet.. Keep up the good work! |
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