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Date
Contributed by
Moon_kitten05_07
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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he picked her up, he was on so late,
his cars was a d**n old crate
he mwt her at the gate
for him she felt some hate
they went to dinner at a place with a high priced rate
for which his coupon had agreat rebate
frist mistake, they first brought his plate
it was steak that he ate
he was cute an okay mate
cassies was right he waten to pacate
her sprits he could levitate,
when they left he had a clean slate
he came from out of state
good thing was, he had no pate
a strangely good time it was fate
after all they were on a date
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Re: Date
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:08:57 AM AEST
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Interesting poem
Nice twist at the end
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Re: Date
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by ItsFELDER on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:41:47 AM AEST
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Interesting poem, clever of you to work the same rhyme scheme through out the piece.
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