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How Beautiful Are You?
Contributed by
Aquaelius
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:36:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I told you that the the sun, the moon, the stars...
nothing is as wonderous as the sight of you.
Would you feel beautiful?
If I told you that no monument on this earth,
is as awe inspiring as the curves of your body.
Would you feel wonderous?
If I told you that my lips quiver, my hands shake...
The entire world spins around me when I'm near you.
Would you feel important?
How do I tell you how beatiful you are?
how each movement you make sings.
How the universe revolves around you,
and breezes blow just to touch you.
How the fact that you are,
Is what makes this the very best world to be in.
If I told you that when I pray, I thank God for you...
Would that make you feel special?
Because you are.
Copyright ©
Aquaelius
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2005-05-12 11:36:15]
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by eternityandaday4u on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:08:51 PM AEST
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| this poem brought a small tear to my eye.. awesome write... keep up the good work.. always eternity... |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:00:47 PM AEST
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I agree with eternity this also brought me to tears this is beautiful in every sense of the word there needs to be more ppl speaking these heart touching words
Michelle |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:34:21 PM AEST
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i love,love,love this poem! the poem itself is beautiful and an absoulutly amazing write. i especially love the lines:
"How the universe revolves around you,
and breezes blow just to touch you"
such a touching poem. keep up the great work! |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:26:26 AM AEST
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this is sooo loving and beautiful... hugs n' love, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:09:32 AM AEST
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Ahh to have a man write this for you!! how heavenly it must feel!!
Great job..
Jenni |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 05:51:38 PM AEST
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A very touching and heartfelt piece, beautifully done. It is a great thing when love can be so vividly expressed. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: How Beautiful Are You?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 07:23:36 AM AEST
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If I told you that when I pray, I thank God for you...
Would that make you feel special?
Because you are.
This part is what touches me most.
huggs,
emy |
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