|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
It's raining again...
Contributed by
In_a_while
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
what's all the haze for
is she back in my head?
should i lay on the floor
or curl up in bed?
my heart is twisted
when she comes around
my pain can't be listed
i make not a sound
she's the dew in the morn'
soaking my shoes
i'm cold before warm
mud tears i should lose
she's a cold ghost
haunting my heart
from little to most
we stay far apart...
it's raining again...
how nice that i cry
no shoulder, friend?
how calm i should i die...
Copyright ©
In_a_while
... [
2005-05-12 12:00:15]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: It's raining again...
(User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:49:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Interesting poem
It doesn't spoon feed you the message
Nice Write
~Dawn |
|
|
Re: It's raining again...
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:28:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| What to say my friend this was another awesome write. One of my favorites of yours but I have to many of those now. You write of lost love like you’ve felt it and I feel your pain and can relate all to well. Take care and keep up the awesome writes….Steve |
|
|
Re: It's raining again...
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:23:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
exquisite poem, hauntingly beautiful, hugs n' love, nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: It's raining again...
(User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:32:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i would give you my shoulder
so
that was a good write
i got teary eyed
just a little...
-->Rae |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
