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One Day
Contributed by
lilikat
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:34:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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One day I will hold you
One day my tears will wet your face
One day I will show you love beyond belief
One day my heart will heal
But for now...My arms are empty
For now my tears flow into empty air
For now my love is stagnent
For now my heart bleeds
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2005-05-12 14:34:09]
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Re: One Day
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by poet70 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:05:00 PM AEST
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I liked the poem, talks about the pain and lonelyness you are in now, and yet it talks about the hope you have for a better furture ahead , that is just awesome how you put all that together in such a short a poem, you did not need allot of fansey words, and a long drawn out poem to express yourself, righton, great job.
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Re: One Day
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:17:21 PM AEST
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| such strong emotion in such a samll poem! i congrtualte you on this you say so much without really saying that much at all. good job! |
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