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Sidelined
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caleb
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:46:19 PM in AEST
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Sidelined.
Sidelined by a morning thought,
A wish that wipes my eyes,
Memories show the grief I bought,
Grasping broken ties,
I wake and hope my heart is healed,
My pride reduced to ash,
My pillow now becomes my shield,
This cheque too high to cash,
Every dog has that one day?
I hope that myth rings true,
When last lines know not what to say,
Why do I still love you?
The truth shes not beside me here,
Keeps this blindfold on,
Why cant I sleep straight for one year?
Where has Miss Rowley gone?
Wept at birth as for a glance,
I saw my future wince,
The moment passed as did the dance,
Been weeping ever since.
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caleb
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Re: Sidelined
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:01:29 PM AEST
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Awwwwww this is so sad! But it has a great rhythmic beat to it that makes the words dance off the page. I think you're going to be a "favorite" on this site in no time! I like you already! :-)
Lovely endearing poem! I alllllllllmost cried! Almost! It rang so true.....
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Sidelined
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by Archie on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:03:34 PM AEST
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| Great write. Reading it aloud is almost like a tounge twister but it goes together well. |
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Re: Sidelined
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by poet70 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:07:51 PM AEST
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great job, you put the words together very well, the others comments was peretty much what I was going to say, lol
Tammi |
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Re: Sidelined
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:42:26 PM AEST
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| Hye, pretty good. Keep it up. |
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Re: Sidelined
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:42:58 PM AEST
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| Hye, pretty good. Keep it up. |
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