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Bliss
Contributed by
tiggytom
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:20:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My book of empty dreams
Pen to the paper
Let the ink start to scream
Words, letters, what do they mean
If I knew howd that help you through
The light is in view
Its a colour thats new
Not pink, not green
But a lighter shade of blue
Is this a sign from you to me
Is this the colour of eternity
Please move over, let me see
Its so slothful
Peaceful I feel
The chains are broken
Oh my god, Im free
Free from pain
From fear, from here
For the first time
My thoughts are clear
Ill say goodbye
Youll soon be here
Copyright ©
tiggytom
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2005-05-12 16:20:46]
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Re: Bliss
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:44:28 AM AEST
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A very well penned and detailed poem. I like the way you've brought this one across to ur reader. Well done.
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