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Without him
Contributed by
CrippinBabi513
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If you wanted to see me cry
Well then i guess you succedded
because me without you
Was the last thing I needed
I wanted to be your girl
Who you held in your arms
Who you kept nice and warm
Kept her safe from harm
I thought you loved me
But i guess I was wrong
For everything we had
Was suddenly gone
The cutest cuple was us to
Because the perfect equation
Is me plus you
Copyright ©
CrippinBabi513
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2005-05-12 19:05:50]
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Re: Without him
(User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:39:00 PM AEST
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| hey...nice poem i really like it its sumthing i cant relate too right now it sucks a whole lot i know but you'll get over him! life moves on! |
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Re: Without him
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:16:53 PM AEST
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| I loved it,it made me think and almost cry though,lol its okay,Geat work. |
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Re: Without him
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:20:00 PM AEST
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straight to the point...
that's your soul there!
I like that..
great poem...
and twisted's right...many fish in a big sea
M.O.H.
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