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Juan
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:05:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So close, yet so far away Haunting memories of my past shatter when i hear your name Love in its own way, love that is true Nothings ever felt more right than you My name was written on the wall of forgotten souls; But i stand forgotten no more now that i found you The past is the past; i see you as my future Happiness surounds me when i speak of you, Heartache fills me when i am without you, Love touches me everytime i think of you
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Re: Juan
(User Rating: 1 ) by rockergirl94 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:45:08 AM AEST (User
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A really great way to describe love. I love your metaphors and imagery, and you have lot's of hard-hitting lines.
"Haunting memories of my past shatter when i hear your name"
"The past is the past; i see you as my future"
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