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Why Did You Have to Die?
Contributed by
fielding88
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Those who mourn are blessed
And shouldn't dwell in sadness
For I shall confess
He lived in happiness.
A soul's never burdened when
The heart's at peace
With a life that transcends
And doesn't cease.
He's purer than us all
With an innocent heart.
His angel wings will halt his fall
To stop his sins from ripping him apart.
Today, as friends, we gather from afar
To seek memories from each other
Of the beloved presence never marred
As he was our brother.
These words echo with only silence to reply
Of the priest's eulogy of the boy that died
With no one by his side.
Copyright ©
fielding88
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2005-05-12 20:08:41]
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:15:32 PM AEST
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| cool poem i could relate my bestfriend passed away and i wonder why he had to die |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem.. cause my boyfriend
died he drowned, and its hard i know to loose
someone you love.. the saddest and the missing part never ends! good poem .. |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:03:34 AM AEST
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| A touching poem, so beautifully written. Losing anyone whether family or friend can be hard. I love this poem because I can relate to it. |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:32:20 AM AEST
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nicely blended piece.
A sad topic, and well done. |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by dixiegirl on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:24:48 PM AEST
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| wow that was really good it takes me back to when my best friend died in a car wreck!!! |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:23:56 AM AEST
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You are all such amazing poets and this was an amazing write. The ending was so very sad and made me want to read this piece over and over. This was very well done.
Keep it up you guys write beautifully,
--amanda-- |
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 08:16:23 PM AEST
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tragically beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Why Did You Have to Die?
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2020 @ 12:05:18 AM AEST
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| Beautifully sad |
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