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I Cry Alone
Contributed by
SimplyMe
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yet another day passes me by
Another day i meant to cry
Just another day to spend alone
Yes alone, all alone
Meaning to this life has come and gone
As the day lingers on
In my room is where i lay
As i think of how much i hate this day
I hate this day as much as any other
I hate this day
Take it away
Oh how i hate this day
As night falls i'm still alone
Laying in this cold room
In this empty bed
Thoughts of an escape fill my head
Through the night i'm still alone
I hate this night just as well
Night is becomming my hell
Though this is my home
I am alone
Alone i cry
I cry alone
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SimplyMe
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2005-05-12 22:23:59]
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Re: I Cry Alone
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by Jimmato on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:53:31 PM AEST
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| Love every last line (Strange usually I find something 'constructive' to say so good for u) |
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Re: I Cry Alone
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:12:07 PM AEST
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| This poem was sad but good. |
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Re: I Cry Alone
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:30:51 PM AEST
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great poem very expressive invokes a lot of inner emotions u write wel always enjoy your poemsl . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: I Cry Alone
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:32:45 AM AEST
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Alucia this is a sad and emotional write. I felt ur pain aand suffering in every line. Hang tuff my friend and know that I'm always here 4 u.
You've expressed urself so deep and well. My ur heart be filled with love and happiness my dear friend.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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